Actually the most important reason why I use the sushi sketches is because its simpler. I tried to draw the one for tooth decay but abit I find it not very nice and very hard to show the idea.

Tooth Decay:

Here are the 3 CG of my sushi sketches i show in class last Thursday. Hoho!
Overall Comment:
Colours are attractive. YAY~ :D
#1:

During tutorial, I presented #2 before #1 cause I sent #1 to my friends and they can't see my name. So I came up with Design #2 with mini onigiri to form the letter "A" hopping that my name will be clearer. Suprisingly, the class says that they can see my name in this design with only 1 onigini to represent the letter "A".
Comments from tutorial:
- Most of them prefer this.
- They feel that its nicer.
- Just have to close up the gaps for "T" and close up the chopstick.
- Zhi Xiong commented to have the 6 maki replaced. (I like the maki alot! So, I think I will not replace themt. :D )
- lower the saucer

Comments from tutorial:
- Onigiri too small?
#3

Comments from tutorial:
- The letter "A" and the soy sauce looks forced.
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