Here are the 8 photos that I presented in class! :D Enjoy~








Tutotial Class Commentsss:
- Photo1 doesnt look like mickey is hungry. -- ya i agree with this! will improve on it!
- Photo2 the mickey looks evil! Maybe can crop and show only the eyes part. Cut away the ears.
- Photo3 doesnt show its an illusion. -- For this photo, I'm trying to create an illusion that shows that it looks like a dog butt and at the same time looks like a pau to mickey~
- Maybe Photo4 can show like photo3 but without the pau look so that people will know that its the same thing that mickey is bitting.
- Photo5 - Do not know whether mickey is shock or full after eating the pau.
- Photo7 looks like an evil character suddenly appear.
- Photo7 and 8 looks like a separate story. The part where mickey is hungry is gone.
- Continue the hunger story
- Arrange of the 8 photos should be consistent. Suddenly changing the direction where the story flows put stress on the viewer.
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