Here are the comments for the previous version from Jing, Sharon and Rayner:
- The infographic is very explantory. No need any text.
- switch the rooster and the hen cause hen lay eggs.
- at the end of the cycle, suddenly stop at the boy. Maybe should point it back to the chick so that the cycle continues.
- Make the boy a farmer with straw hats.
From the comments I got yesterday, I editted it accordingly and tadah! Here is my final piece! Presenting to you.. "Farmer and Chicken Relationship"
I change the title from "The Chicken Life - Happily Ever After" to "Farmer & Chicken Relationship" because I find it more suitable in this editted version. :) I also added in food for the chick to eat to show that the farmer feeds the chick... :D Okay thats all!
Thank you!
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